All Comments on '...That's My Car'

Man , you tell a good tale, thank you

Stream of consciousness writng seldom works. This was a hot mess.

Drawn out story that never lifted off for this reader. Normally enjoy a trip to the bayou state, but this one was a miss. 3.4*

5*

Thanks, a very good start to my day. And thanks for mentioning the aroma.

Great!!!

Sheesh! Richard/Ricky/Rick/Dick/Drew/Andrew/Andy is like a latter day Typhoid Mary, infecting every swinging skirt within reach, and with Mommy Dearest Sylvia propping him up. What a comically evil sociopath. Only the knowledge that he’s fictional (I hope!?) makes him laughable. A fun tale with a very sweet happy ever after. Thanks for the story. Oh - and thanks for ‘seedeeoh’. I’ll have to ‘borrow’ that little gem into my repertoire of insults.

Another super story!!!

5*

Gave you 5 stars for this one. Richard left a path of destruction behind him and apparently felt sorry for himself. Would have liked to hear a little more about his mother but I am guessing you will throw the bitch back into a future plot at some time. Too bad Richard didn't meet up with the two big brothers of one of his targets.

But if you look at it another way, pregnancy IS a self-inflicted injury.

Should have been in Lesbians and Gays section

Dude seriously needs to learn what a condom is for. 4 women, all the same body type as the woman he actually married, two of them a mother and daughter. All knocked-up and he's f*cked off somewhere. I have no sympathy for Richard 'Dick' Andrew Hennessey. If you don't wanna plant a seed, don't do the deed.

Nope no one to like in this story. The husband is an idiot and all the females are not much better.

Romance might have been a better category. Cute story, but your Dramatis Personae list was about 25% of your page count.

I really enjoyed this tale. I love happy ending.

i loved it

Liked it

Really enjoyed reading this story. Good romance and hot sex equals five stars.

Probably your best. Thank you!

More big dippers than Blackpool Pleasure Beach, extremely entertaining!!!

so different from his usual but still amazing.

You know the routine by now. JB44 writes a story. JB44 gets five stars. It's fairly predictable for someone with your talent and track record. And yes, 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

That was such a mess I couldn't even get past the first page. I have to question the sanity of those claiming to have given this 5 stars...

I find I love seeing what's going on in DeGarde from time to time. Thank you for the timely diversion. This was a good one (as is every other glimpse of DeGarde.)

I love that you are building a whole community... a whole state full of characters... no individual, stand-alone narrative, but lives and stories that intertwine, making it just like everyone's hometown.

People you walk past in the street... you know their backstory. Makes it all so much richer.

I also cannot believe how deluded and selfish Richard, Rick, Andy was. The sad thing is there are people like that. Destroying their own lives to feed their fantasies and greed. He will die full of regret, never getting to know the string of children he gave life to.

Makes me shudder to imagine that fate. To know my children is the pinnacle of my life's satisfaction.

I don't normally browse through the lesbian section but this story was in the loving wives section and written by JB44 so I clicked on it. To my surprise I enjoyed the story and it was very well written

Beyond confusing and scattered. Not up to expectations.

A master of character building and enrichment , makes you pick sides and feel emotions . Only a few writers have that ability . Thanks for sharing with us your skilled talents and doing so for free . Free entertainment , wow ! 5 out of 5

Well told. And, DAMN... he is a DICKHEAD. 5 stars. DMW aka

Loved the story but being would like to see Richard suffer a bit more

A very nice Romance, or Lesbian Sex story. Kind of a mediocre or even insulting Loving Wives story. So Justine is a Forensic Accountant, but her husband is pissing away thousands of dollars a year on a secret apartment and the Accountant has no clue? And somewhere Justine's lawyer says they have to subpoena Richard's tax returns, indicating that the brainless husband is doing his own federal and state taxes instead of his Accountant wife?

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So we know Richard is fairly stupid, makes little or no money, has an average size cock of no special appeal, but is really really handsome. So that's who this uber intelligent independent perceptive discerning Lesbian married? Even though she's always had her strongest and most intense romances with women? And this story is in the Loving Wives category?

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Fail. Put the fucking story in the category where it belongs. And stop insulting women who love and respect other women. Richard is a screaming asshole horn dog who ruins stupid women's lives and needs to be put down. Show some respect, and some Karma.

JimBob44 - the unsurpassed master of far out of left field stories.

Loved this one because I loved the very real people in it.

Thank you for sharing!

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Sir, your story telling technique is very unique. No one else comes even close to start so messy and all over the place, mixing past, present, and future and finally bringing it all together at the end to conclude a beautiful and well written story.

Worth a 10* but I can only give 5 unfortunately.

Loved it ! Now one of my favorites.

Very good.

Andy/Richard is a real piece of work.

That was just fun!

Sweet story.

The "comedy" of her ex husband impregnating women that resemble her left and right fell a little flat tho. I can believe a naive virgin getting accidentally pregnant, but the others? Is this story set in 1950?

Another excellent JB44 tale, so very well told. 5*

I really liked these characters, to see something so sweet come from something so painful was a treat.

Thank you for sharing the world you have created with us.

wrong category

I've been reading your work for years, and this is one of your best. I think you are getting better with time. I loved the romance, affection, and building relationship between those lovely girls. Didn't care much about what the asshole was up to, but I don't hate that it was there either. All in all, a well deserved 5 stars I reckon. Thanks for another good story!

I agree wrong category, couldn't finish it.

Delightful characters and wonderfully written.

Good story. I enjoyed the realistic interplay among family characters.

don't care what category this is in . had a little bit of several categories in it . still a damn good read ,thanks .

This is exactly the story I like to read: two people, drawn together by circumstance, develop feelings for one another and fall in love. Wonderful!

Thanks for a delightfully uplifting love story. It was thoroughly enjoyable.

I like the character-building and destroying in this rather long tale, I wonder about the mind of the loser named Richard Andy Dick who loses at every turn in this story. Be they lesbians or whatever, I'm left liking the girls and wishing incurable ED for the "hero" .....

Seriously, who uses a commode? For those (like the author apparently) who don't know what a commode is, it's a chamber pot. The sort of thing you train kids on before they are big enough to use a toilet. As for the rest of the story, the less said the better I think.

I'm sure the world is populated by these dick type characters.