All Comments on 'That's What Friends Are For'

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pcman1950pcman1950about 1 year ago

Nice interlude, indeed! Or entre leche. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice read, good writing! Interesting approach - started hot, then moved to the more important aspects of life which are ultimately hotter (more satisfying). Well done - 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well crafted. Backstory delivered centrally helped make the piece memorable. Both central characters are likable with Brandon particularly well shown as a caring, considerate, compassionate human being. I will be looking to read more from the "little death". This was really refreshing. Thank you.

dudley_tundishdudley_tundishabout 1 year ago

Not bad. Plausible; reasonably simple yet thorough. Nice insights to develop the characters.

uglyorangutanuglyorangutanabout 1 year ago

A sweet, good hearted story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Really nice story. I don't usually come here for any sort of emotional aspect to the stories, but this was sweet.

KingCuddleKingCuddle4 months ago

Hmmm...Lovely, as is.

HOWEVER, would it be improved by her planning preceding

her nipple "crisis"!

So we could be enjoying the suspense...?

fittexanmanfittexanman3 months ago

Five Stars! Please consider a sequel! You may like my story with a similar line Handjobs for Humanity Ch. 3

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People have asked about my name - petitmort. It's a bastardization of la petite mort or little death in French, a literary term for orgasm. I am part French, part Italian, living in the US now and working as a writer and editor. I love travel, film, nature, good food and win...