by petitmort
Nice read, good writing! Interesting approach - started hot, then moved to the more important aspects of life which are ultimately hotter (more satisfying). Well done - 5*
Well crafted. Backstory delivered centrally helped make the piece memorable. Both central characters are likable with Brandon particularly well shown as a caring, considerate, compassionate human being. I will be looking to read more from the "little death". This was really refreshing. Thank you.
Not bad. Plausible; reasonably simple yet thorough. Nice insights to develop the characters.
Really nice story. I don't usually come here for any sort of emotional aspect to the stories, but this was sweet.
Hmmm...Lovely, as is.
HOWEVER, would it be improved by her planning preceding
her nipple "crisis"!
So we could be enjoying the suspense...?
Five Stars! Please consider a sequel! You may like my story with a similar line Handjobs for Humanity Ch. 3