All Comments on 'That's What Friends Are For Ch. 01'

This was great. Five stars. I'd like to know more about Leah, how she became so bossy in the bedroom, what are her hopes and dreams, what she does for fun (besides eating and sex), etc. She's quite a character, and I like her. I'm waiting for the sequel! -- JBE

Well done. S/F, brother.

This seems like a good start for many chapters to occur.

I do like that you don't do graphic detail and allow my mind to do a lot of the work.

The mind is more sexy than the body in most cases.

Just when I was really getting into this story, the writer hit the pause button. There are so many directions the storyline can take. I am curious to see how the friendships endure. The sex is descriptive but not graphic, which is refreshing. I hope the next chapter is already in the works. Looking forward to it!

and it was going so well..and then you brought in a spoiler,,dont care for bossy people, men or women, she only gave one thank you and not one please, that doesn't work for me, so I will not bother with any future chapters. but you have other stories I will explore.

oh, almost forgot,,,,,,,whats with washing and blow drying her hair?? jesus h Christ,,talk about pussy whipped on the first date!

The world you built is great and easy to immerse yourself into. I just ask if you could make the conversation with Leah a little less stilted. I know you were trying to convey her bossiness, but it came off a little robotic. I hope that was constructive, thanks for writing

Very well written. Looking forward to the next episode

They must be real friends!

What are friends for. They need a foresome

USMC. understand that shit like this goes on in military and civilian life. AND that is why divorce rate so high. Not only cause but a big one. jtwheels