All Comments on 'Thawing the Ice Queen'

Ya just never know where your sick games will lead. Good story and great finish-- our boy is about to get a whole body full of pain.

Writingdragon

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Lizzy

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that this was going to be another 'stupid girl' story but it wasn't and the exposition at the end was great. Even better it was erotic without having any (litteral) sex.

Great story, thanks

What we have here is a fine storyteller with a great sense of humour. My only question is: How many pieces was the shoulder in when "Clint" let go of it? That is a great ending, she has her "half-brother" backing her up, the way family should be. Loved it and look forward to the next one.

Never, EVER talk about Fight Club. At least until your mission is accomplished.

He shoulda kept his trap shut about his intents until the money was in hand and he was far, far out of range.

If I were her half brother I'd walk away and laugh at him. His embarrassment would hurt far worse than a Steelers' bare hands. Especially the Steelers. If he'd been a Green Bay Packer or an Oakland Raider, well I could see some pain comin' out of that. The Steelers are just a buncha wimps. *ducks*

i'm glad he got what he deserved i hope clint kicks his ass. man i hate guys like that

I had an inkling where this was going, but the final delivery was priceless. Good work!

If it is important, do your OWN research!

Great story and twist.