by SyleusSnow
Thanks for a unusual and fun story. Mislabeled though, should be under First Time category. 😉
That was weirdly hopeful. I loved both the setup and the description of their first time together. Thanks!
Refreshing
And now it’s evident that she’s a real woman now, and he will be wise to propose.
You did a great job of showing Lena's growth and maturity, but perhaps not so great with the narrator. I got the impression that he was almost falling for the new Lena, but it was never made totally explicit.
About 15.25 years too late
Think about all the sex they missed for all those years. Well, at least they've finally crossed that threshold and appear ready for more. Good Valentine's Day story. Good luck in the contest.
Found this to be a great story. Good job bringing out the setting details. I could envision the inn and the surroundings. Gave you 5 gold stars.
What a lovely story. Sweet characters, I hate to see it end. Crossing my fingers for a Part 2!
I really enjoyed this story, but it seems a little incomplete. The question of whether these two end up together long term is there, but it’s not the most important question. How does Lena’s maturing affect her relationship with her parents? Does the narrator have any family? What do they think Lena?
Been slow on the site for the holidays, so I started digging. Read your recent release and found this gem. I would have liked another page or so to see if they ended as I hoped. Well crafted plot lines made a very unusual premise make all the sense in the world. Good job! 4.6*
(Think I saw another Romance story on your list - off to more fun...)
Much too late, but thank you to everyone for the kind comments. This is a weird little story I thought would be universally hated. So glad to know some people enjoyed it. You obviously have superior taste in smut :-)
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@Demosthenes384bc: A gem? Thank you so much. I try to put a little uniqueness, romance and feeling into every story, whether in the Romance category or not. Looking forward to your comments on all of them!