All Comments on 'The 7 Secrets of Mr. Magpie Ch. 03'

You have incredible ideas and then execute them wonderfully. Thank you!

Holy hell that was hot. That is a genius business idea, too! Great chapter, and always happy to be reminded what a great guy Raf is.

This is one of the hottest and most real executions of one of my top fantasies I have ever seen. Very, very well done.

That was the absolute hottest thing I have ever read. Someone send this guy a god damn trophy.

Seriously, fantastic and hotter than an August night.

Very nicely written story. I'm bookmarking this to ensure I continue to follow Raf's story and how the secrets show up.

Bravo!

As always with your work, I find myself wanting to have more to read. I mean I very happy to start one of your stories. They are easy to read snd I consume them, sorry if this is offensive, like a fat kid with an ice cream cone on a hot summer day. Then I am stuck waiting like a junkie, strung out, waiting for his next fix for your next story or chapter to come out. Please don't ever stop putting out stories!!

What a delightful story full of secrets. Very well written. Can't wait for Raf's five month interlude.

F'n AWESOME!!!!

Clever, creative, erotic (wow), unique, and ... original.

MORE PLEASE ????

I can't get my head around someone paying 30m for the doppelganger experience. Is it an incest thing? Where's the attraction of fucking two of the same person? Oh well, onto the next part where 2 Rafs fuck shelia

Brilliant, that has to be an amazing business Shield has set up, such imagination. 5⛤

What a neat concept.