All Comments on 'The 7 Secrets of Mr. Magpie Ch. 07'

Overall a great read , this last chapter felt a bit rushed though, a bit short for wrapping everything up.

Great series, the chapters were short for my tastes but that is ok. The end of chapter 4 mentioned seeing Sheila again but I didn't see that unless I just missed it.

Great series. Good finish. The last chapter and this one felt a little rushed. I would have loved some more emphasis on emotions for them, and on the feelings of their union. But otherwise an excellent conclusion to a very enjoyable story.

Enjoyed the story, and the lessons.

Is that the end?

Did I miss Raf seeing Sheila again?

Is there another storyline?

I think you should revisit and rewrite this sometime in the future as it could be fleshed out better. The ghost thing was a bit out of nowhere too, perhaps this kind of exposition could have been delivered by the grandmother on her death bed? And could have led to a better meeting between RAF and the granddaughter?

great story, lots of pieces and in 7 parts, wonderful

CP . One of your best . Well done . 5 BIG stars as always . Thank you .

Great instalment for wrapping up this story 5⛤

Excellent thankyou

Quite fun, enjoyed binging it! Thanks.

I just read chapter 1 and the 2nd page of chapter 7!

Now that I know this has a happy ending, I can go back and read the whole thing!

5 /5 ⭐!

I’ve read many of your stories now and, in my opinion, this is the best so far - an unique premise, great structure, well executed, interesting character development, nice overarching theme, truly engrossing. Thank you.