All Comments on 'The 8x10 of Darcy O'Dell Ch. 01'

with so many different episodes and experiences that I was sorry to see it end. Now I'm going to read your earlier submissions.

You are the best writer on this site. A few others are close, but nobody matches you when it comes to creating sympathetic characters whose joys and frustrations come across so deeply through the written word. Bravo, sir. Bravissimo!

You take feelings that don't have words and describe them perfectly:

"The pain as the love leaves your body." I've been there.

"Two people who loved each other too much to stay together." Check.

The sexy parts are good, too. You share some interesting techniques for enhancing orgasm. I hope it helps your readers to find deeper fulfillment in their sex lives.

My only regret is that so much time passes between your posting new stories. But I guess that just enhances their value. Gems are rare. Thank you for sharing yours.

Please keep writing when your schedule allows.

these characters are real people, and I truly hope I get to meet them again.

Outstanding story ... and it's only the first chapter!

But it was earned here. Your writing skill is excellent. You know how to spin a yarn in ways other than sexual. (Although those parts ain't bad.) Looking forward to Part II.

you were able to that in way that made me sit back and remember Sandy (now Sandra) and do the "might have beens" but glad to be where I am now... great story.

That's good writing and brings up memories of 50 some years ago...Thanks.