All Comments on 'The Academy Affair'

Excellent story!

5

Rough and tough. Magnificent and hypnotic writing style, as usual.

Only one mole in a perfect diamond: mr. Tendle is called "James (Jack)" on the first page, and then "John (Jack)" on the second after "...given me about John (Jack) Tendle."

Great story, thank you.

You weave a beautiful tale

Beautifully written. 5* from me. Really enjoyed how you wrapped all the pieces and clues up at the end nicely.

Brilliant!

and here we see a bit more of your versatility,,,,thanks

Great story 5*. I love the way you wrapped it up with a bow at the end without it seeming to be rushed.

ok!...

good story. too bad that there are actually scum in this world that prey on other humans. 5

A wonderful surprise!

Romance? Not so much. Super fast moving Detective story? 5* all the way. Movie worthy as action thriller.

The Hoary Cleric, a guest

This one’s not my usual read, and I certainly wasn’t expecting to find it here, but I’m glad I did! It’s engaging, entertaining, well-written, and very well edited. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Nice piece of work. Tight, coherent, believable. Five stars for sure.

Here from the Hammered challenge. You've done a great job with this using Spillane's style, both with the characterization and the writing-style in a modern setting. In doing so, you've created a very well-written and enjoyable tale with a well-developed plot and a great conclusion. Excellent work, 5*.

Really enjoyed this read!

Great Detective story, and fun read. Five stars.

Really enjoyed it, a fantastic story neatly packaged into a quick read. My only quibble was the character names, just a bit jarring to the ear, but that’s just my opinion, so take it with a grain of sand.

This was a really excellent story, and a worthy entry into the Spillane Challenge. I 'couldn't put it down', as they say of print books.

This was my first of the Mickey Spillane stories . I'm not sure it can be beat , but I'm going to check .

Another excellently told tale in the Hammer event. This was very much on point in the noir elements. I really enjoyed this lady version of Hammer. Thanks for this one. It's top end five stars.

Brilliant fun read! Well done!

I love these events because I always find a new author or so to put on my shelf. As you are now. Keep up the good work.

-rwh

Kind of hard to think that this was a "Romance" story, but it was good nonetheless.

The pacing gave me my cardiovascular for the next 10 days! Thank you!

I really like the ambiguity you maintained about Taffy’s gender until she claimed a relatively rare vagina. Seriously well plotted too.

Surprises keep coming, the breadth of your imagination is very impressive. Absolutely a 5🌟

*****I love P I stories. What a entertaining read. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to another one????