All Comments on 'The Accident'

An unexpected twist at the end. Jennifer was the only character described. Jeniffer's attire was good for the story but not realistic. How he kept her quiet the entire time was something I wondered about. The hedge separating the two couples was a good idea. The fact she was being raped and her husband seduced was a different tactic. All in all, Iike the story and encourage you to continue writing.

At first I thought it was rape, so I didn't think I would like it until she Gave her consent and the twist. By the end, I thought it was really good.

Very turned on

How come I pressed "1," but the vote went in as a "4?"