All Comments on 'The Addon Arena'

by DanteofSparda

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DanteofSpardaDanteofSpardaover 9 years agoAuthor
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I haven't had a story go this long without a single rating. Man i knew this was unapologeticlly b-grade, but damn. This is hilarious.

Anyway, i'll get back to my more serious story soon. This just sort of wrote itself whilst inebriated and was worth a good laugh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
its alright

It was a good little short story but a good reason for people not saying anything is perhaps the fact that we are anxiously awaiting for spritly fellow to continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting

I kinda like this story. Interesting setting. Feels like you're taking cues from the Genkibowl from Saints Row 3. That's how I heard the announcers and probably why I'm liking the story.

I say run with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it!

Please write more of this story!

ExinatorExinatorover 9 years ago
Can't wait for more

This is pretty funny, more than anything else. Although I'd be lying if I said it wasn't arousing too. Well done. I want to see where you take this next - perhaps another fighter?

OnyxShadowOnyxShadowover 9 years ago
Surprisingly Good

I've been a bit dismayed with all the futa/male lately as I really only like futa/female. Until recently it seems it was a bit of a rarity, and all the sudden its about the only thing coming out under the futanari tag.

I gave this one a chance anyway, and I'm glad I did. The story was interesting, and the action was incredibly hot.

But I'm still REALLY hoping for most of the upcoming opponents to be female if you continue this series. Its your story, though, and I respect that you have every right to take this tale in any direction that you wish.

Thanks for the great read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well done

Despite your disclaimer, i did not find the story to be repetitive, and actually enjoyed it very much. Cannot wait for another one.

TheWalkingDowdTheWalkingDowdover 9 years ago
Loved it

I really enjoyed this one, would love a second chapter, hell maybe even a third and fourth, great stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it!!!

Enjoyed reading it! Needs many more chapters

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