All Comments on 'The Adopted Ch. 03'

I was annoyed after reading Chapter 2--when it stated a rich guy was in charge of the fights. I knew it was him and was disgusted how this guy was to try to get her. I liked the twist that u gave the story and he rescued her. In telling them at the end she was off limits should've included the whole family. I can relate to years of dealing with the anger issues. Its not always easy. An overall awesome story

Well, you're off, but by just a hair

This guy wasn't in charge of the fights, on fact he was completely unaware about it, and that's what shot him in the foot

The members of the fight club knew who Dan was, and knew not to fuck with him.

The professor guy had no idea about his student's anger management problem

He knew that she knew that he knew that she knew that... That was always a loop I'd think about in my childhood,you hit me right in the heart(I'm the same guy who commented about your sarcasm on the second story.)

To like this story but it just devolved into 3 lesbians, a whore and thier home grow penis. Sasha and Danny would have made a great story but all the women fucking each other was complete bullshit and I stopped caring about any of them and actually felt sorry for Danny cause the women seemed to want to fuck each other and really didn't care for Danny as a person and the dagon shit was fucking stupid part of the story. Thank God you stopped writing and I'm sorry i wasted my time reading this.