All Comments on 'The Adventurer Pt. 01'

I like the potential in this story, but it is in serious need of an editor.

Excellent beginning. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Awesome story, Can not wait for the next chapter. Cheers.

"Her pussy was unshaven and rather loose"

"She bent down, blatantly showing me both her vagina and her anus--both had certainly seen some use."

That's just not how that works. It's amazing that someone could write porn, but have failed to watch porn and notice that even porn stars don't have "looser" vaginas as a result of use. It's called elasticity.