by mw4w_wisc
As much as Kevin gives with his Monster Cock, be Curious to see if his 'Bird of Prey' really wants to limit use of His Cock by Her or any Woman!
This was too much of a departure. The first 3 chapters were 5. This was a 1. Can u get back on track?
I guess I'm somewhat like the previous commenters.
Over years on Literotica and thousands of stories,
I've avoided BDSM almost entirely -- I do not even get why anyone wants to spank or be spanked.
This story was somewhat of an exception, since the BDSM treatment of Kevin was mild (in this case/story) and he derived plenty of pleasure from it, still his restriction and lack of freedom causes me to feel a bit uneasy.
The second factor is cuckold.
Just not my thing.
(Although, inconsistently, I have a propensity for well-told, respectful cuckquean stories.)
The cuckold stories I have enjoyed were written from the vantage point of the lucky guy who was the recipient of his friend's whacky, incomprehensible prediliction to share his hot wife.
However, even in such scenarios I do not enjoy it if the wife uses it as an opportunity to put down her husband -- as in this story.
So, although this story was well-written, with imaginative, creative scenarios just like the previous three chapters (which I rated πππππ); on the basis of content alone (in spite of being well-written), I downrated this story to πππ.
RATING MORE INDICATIVE
From the high rating of this chapter (4.29) -- although not as high as the previous the three previous chapters -- it is obvious that the readers (or, at least the raters), are more favorable to this story than us commenters.
Paul in Oklahoma
I so wish that you finished this series it was pretty damn good. I also wished you had Kevin clean his room π