All Comments on 'The Adventures of a Slut Mommie Ch. 01'

Ahh, who wouldn't want a Mommie like that? Fantastic. Look forward to the next installment.

Wow... very hot! Thank you, Mr. Murray!

Your mechanics/ writing structure is horrible. Its really off putting when you put multiple verbal exchanges in one paragraph. It really damages the story and makes it hard to read.

Though it takes some adjustment to UK/Aussie writing, I found yours less confusing. Obviously we Yanks massacre English, we’ll survive. Great story and especially like the floating effect of her memories of the session. Looking forward to more. 5*

Can’t wait for the other parts.

I enjoyed the story very much and hope to see many more chapters to it.

He needs to keep fucking her, and also hit the sister. Then a three-way!! 5*****

@Holtaren: Thank you.

@MormonJack: No, mate. Thank you!

@Master_Doctor: Noted. I tried for a different reading effect by making the exchange look like it happened in real time hoping it would strike a chord with the readers. Obviously, it did for you. A jarring one, unfortunately.

@Lee2012: Thank you for your kind words.

@Bob150Bob: Part 2 is written. Part 3 is in progress. I'll release part 2 towards the end of next week.

@Bob150Bob: Chapter 2 is complete and will be released next week. I'm writing chapter 3 now.

@Scorpio1052: I'm hoping for many more chapters.

@Lookolderbutfeelyounger: You'll have to see how my story develops to see if your wishes are granted, I suspect they will be!