by FlyingDutchman7
Im no native speaker, but do yourself a favor and let a proofreader look it over.
there are some mistakes in there that look like autocorrect running rampage.
groan instead of grown
seamen for semen *lol*
I really like how you set up your world. Would love to read more.
This will be an epic series. I just hope you have enough time set aside to keep it going. More growth and expansion. More partners. Don’t go too dark please.
i study myth quite a bit. i love the direction of incubus and how you had other supernaturals around. cant wait for another
Thoroughly enjoyed this and I'd love to read an entire series of Levi's exploits
Great intro into fantasy with enough new details to be interesting and set yours apart. 5 stars! Keep up the great work. :)
Undoubtedly one of my favorite story I read. I loved it, the style, the story, the universe. A pure delight to read, hope to see more adventures of this incubus in the future !!