All Comments on 'The Adventures of a Virgin Incubus'

by FlyingDutchman7

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2027fred2027fredover 6 years ago
Good start

Please write more I would like to see where this goes

Fred

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Would be interesting to see where it goes...

Im no native speaker, but do yourself a favor and let a proofreader look it over.

there are some mistakes in there that look like autocorrect running rampage.

groan instead of grown

seamen for semen *lol*

GhostPlasmaGhostPlasmaover 6 years ago
Love it.

I really like how you set up your world. Would love to read more.

ZoconjaZoconjaover 6 years ago
More please?

I'm an addict and I've found a new drug more plz?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is going to be an epic series!

This will be an epic series. I just hope you have enough time set aside to keep it going. More growth and expansion. More partners. Don’t go too dark please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice twist

i study myth quite a bit. i love the direction of incubus and how you had other supernaturals around. cant wait for another

GhostPlasmaGhostPlasmaover 6 years ago
Sequel?

Is there any hope of this story seeing a continuation?

WanderingLost42WanderingLost42over 6 years ago
Please continue!

Thoroughly enjoyed this and I'd love to read an entire series of Levi's exploits

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great start.. needs minor editing

Great intro into fantasy with enough new details to be interesting and set yours apart. 5 stars! Keep up the great work. :)

MoaningNightMoaningNightabout 5 years ago
One of the best

Undoubtedly one of my favorite story I read. I loved it, the style, the story, the universe. A pure delight to read, hope to see more adventures of this incubus in the future !!

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