by first2learn
You need to watch your tenses. Keep to past tense.
The story? Hot but juvenile.
NOT BAD SO FAR
WOULD LIKE SEE MOM PREGNATE AS SHE IS STILL YOUNG AND ALL THE
SEX THEY BEEN HAVING
AUNT CLAIRE MOVE'S FOR GOOD AS SHE HAS MADE PLENTY OF MONEY
TO SUPORT ALL TREE PLUS THE CHILDREN THEY WILL BE HAVING BY CURT