by sajukno
What's with all the one page stories? The writing is okay but it feels rushed because it's only one page.
My only wish is that the stories were a little longer. I feel like you have the talent to create something with a little more suspense both action wise and sexually. Still a great read though
I think you shouldn't change the length of the chapters. Great job!
One page is more than enough. I often find stories with dozen or more pages and I just can’t find it in myself to keep reading. Losing interest