All Comments on 'The Adventures of John Law Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Boring

Yawn

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Ignore that 'boring' asshole!!

Keep going!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
very good story

I have enjoyed all 3 of your John Law stories. I am looking to future stories.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 5 years ago

Too bad Katie is on the pill

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 5 years ago
I'm surprised by the comments

How could anyone think this was boring? Very hot story! I hope you ended up with Katie, but I have a sinking feeling you didn't. Katie seems quite open minded; at her age I would have been freaked to meet a guy fucking a bunch of wives including my own mother, and have him be my age, to boot. And then to fuck him and want to see him some more? For me, it's hard to imagine. Still, I'm enjoying the stories. Question, though: What happened to Lisa?? -- JB

PS: One technical point. Assuming you were born in 1950, and were 19, this was 1969. Everyone knew about the pill in 1969. Everyone (man and woman alike) was also enjoying the freedom it provided, vis à vis sex, especially because it was long before the scourge of AIDS.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Fun Stuff

Great chapter.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
Even though

I haven't read any other chapters, I'm pretty sure this is where this adventure should have ended......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Five huuuuge stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter. Does he ever make love to Herman girls?

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

Another 5 Stars again... Thank you...!!

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I spent 23 years in the U.S. Army followed by 20 years in law enforcement. During that time I was a bodyguard for many high-profile clients. I have travelled to over 35 countries. I have had many interesting encounters with females during that time.

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