All Comments on 'The Adventures of Laura Pt. 01'

I know cuckolding is a fetish, but isn't bukkake also a fetish? Why is this in LW?

I didn't anticipate such a plot. I've stumbled on these kinds before and I still can't get my mind around the idea that anyone -- male or female -- actually find such to be exciting, stimulating.

Well chapter 1 is a stupid cuck story. If the rest of the tale is in this vein it will not succeed.

So beware folks this is another silly cuck effort, if u hate cuck stories like me give this a BIG MISS!!!

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why would he stay and why would he take the slut back home with him let his buddies have the whore

Do these places really exist? I want to take my man and be Laura! But I am not bringing his friends.

The mere fact that this spineless, piece-of-shit husband allowed his slut wife to manipulate him and humiliate him in this way is beyond belief. Then he seems surprised that his bullshit "friends" are there to add to his humiliation by semi-fucking his wife and cumming all over her. Then they let him know what will be happening in the near future as they are going to fuck his wife. and he's HAPPY!

Any "MAN" with any self-respect would have tried to stop his wife and, if she wouldn't stop, just get up and leave the slut to her fate. Of course, divorce would immediately follow.

He should have got up and left when he found out what was going to happen, deceitful once, she can never be trusted again.

And to make it worse- garbage.

1 star

Would have gotten up and left the slut. Marriage would be over

That truly was bloody awful!!

To write part 2. To uninspiriet(?). English isnt my native languade.

Or say boring.

When is part 2 coming out?

nothing but another whore and wimp story .divorce that nasty cunt

Absolutely fantastic, loved it all and can't for more stuff from you.

Keep writing, if they could write, they wouldn't be in the comments. If they weren't warped and twisted little faggots, they wanted have bothered commenting to make their feelings return after they came. If you want actual constructive criticism, you needed more buildup, some bigger reason for her to trigger man into this party, you can do unrealistic scenes, and Jesus guys it's porn do you watch John Wiggins say oh my God it's not realistic. But it's a big leap for a wife to go from never doing anything to that kind of a scene, maybe she saw something on his computer, maybe she flirts a little bit over and over again, hint a little more but this was a solid effort. Also there is no story the loving wives crowd likes

An absolutely despicable story, no redeeming characteristics whatsoever, even if you like “cuck” stories this was beyond horrible.

A stupid nauseous cunt, a sissy cuck and a shitty bunch of so called friends

Just another reason to have a separate category for this drivel.

Oh wow, please tell me that there really places like this, that it's not just some fantasy dreamed up by the author. I would just love to be in Laura's position, all that cum bathing you, plus a bellyful as a bonus. 5 stars, but would give it more if I could, deffo more please, pretty please.

No real man would ever put up with that crazy. He should had grown a pair got up and drop the cunt and his so called friends.Pulled out his phone and took picture's and videos walked out and divorce the cunt. Better yet taken everything of value and skip out on her . She could become the star act for that show from now on.

Thanks!!

Eep? Really? This was absolute garbage. If she and these 'friends' want something on her tongue...how about the barrel of a 12 gauge?

That would have made this story fantastic!

Jilted husband lays waste to stupid whore wife and entire front row of worthless cocksure imbeciles.

That's not a loving wife!

LOL, that coming from a scum bag willing cuckold lover like you? I bet you get off turning your wife into a whore for others. Fuck yourself, that's about all you're capable of doing. One star for this garbage.

The only fag here seems to be you. 1*

another trash/garbage writer. Only the sewer rats that crawled out of the slimy holes would favor shit like this. You know who you are, the whiners who keep telling authors to ignore the haters. What the fuck is so erotic about willing cuckoldry and men who turn wives into whores for others. Willing cuckoldry equals garbage in my book.

Cluck City all the way ..What A Slut of a Wife .. They deserve each other .

I'm not a big fan of cuckold stories but the public bulls is wasn't. Goid job.

Two days later the divorce papers were served to her and he threw her out of his house. The divorce judge heard the course of the evening and did not award her a cent!