by JustJimColo
nice story. A bit more in the way of description of the participants would be nice. I'd love to read more about these three.
You describe a very sexually explicit scene, but leave out the feelings. If it's your first time doing this thing and first time doing the bi thing, you're going to be nervous and have misgivings. Was Kay interested in your body or was she following Rod's lead? Was he checking you out? I suspect you know that, but didn't put it in the text. Wordiness never hurts an erotic story--if you're describing the sex.
As to the feelings when this was happening, all I can say is that everything just felt "right" and natural at the time. I guess the feeling was more of just an extension of a friendship.
Feelings are always in question after the fact, even when trying to recall. From experience, at the moment it actually happens - who's thinking? With friends you trust, I was willing to go with the flow for most anything. Your script was exciting as it's written. We plan a visit today with hopes and desires to know a similar 1sr-time ,response and pleasures for all ... with a new acquaintance, . My concern is his size; which seems impossibly large Now, Relaxing is fine to remember, but difficult when it's happening - each first time. Thank you for today's teaser.
Who has more fun than people? Open, loving, sexual people.
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
I truly got turned on reading this story.. very enjoyable ..didn't want it to end... 5 stars