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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loved it!

A long but brilliant build up to a great story.

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Now, when I read back over my first stories, I can see how badly they need re-writing. Maybe, I will, if I get time. I just hope my later ones are better. My sincere thanks for some of the very kind comments that I have received recently, they make it all the more rewarding.