All Comments on 'The After-School Special'

Lil too mushy for my tastes. The characters seemed insipid, and lacked depth.

It should be the official job of a father to bust his baby girl's cherry. Her father's fat veiny daddy-dick should be the first cock up his little princess's adorable little cunt and the first huge dose of creamy sperm up a girl's twat should come from her father's heavy daddy-balls.

"Pull him off her cock" and others like that just need more attention . Not the best by far but pretty good .

I loved your story and I certainly hope their will be additional chapters! Well written.