by randemwriter
This longtime favorite of mine should absolutely have a sequel. Can't wait. I love the moral dilemma and dialog about kink corrupting an innocent, and a dom taking power offered by the sub. And, it's hot. Good writing!
Especially the part that we still don't know her name. I wish you'd write more. I need me a Ryan.
This story was fantastic. It had the kink I love combined with first time, which is hard to find. I hope you write more, this definitely needs to be a series!
I love this story! I love all your stories. It's my perfect kink and idc of it's realistic or not, I just love it! By far my favorite!
I simply loved the title, since it's also the same name of one of my favorite songs ever.
Really interesting story, I'm not into being treated and hurt bad like Ryan loves to do with his "girlfriends" but well, at the same time I was concerned I couldn't help but feel excited too. So it was a good mixture, I suppose.
I can't wait for part 2, it must become a series, please! And please publish a continuation really soon, my pussy couldn't help but pound of fear and curiosity of what is coming next when I read the last sentence!
It was too short, but a really nice reading, I read it super quick! So I definitely need more now!
...I love how you have taken the same theme/kink in each of your stories and grown with it? Your characters are more or less the same (I think Anya has been the sole deviation), but they have become more in depth, and you're exploring their relationships to themselves, their sexualities, and each other. All while keeping your scenes well-spaced and intensely hot!
They're also incredibly problematic, to be sure, but that's why they are fantasies on an erotica website.
Good work, keep it up!
Not erotic at all. The girl isn't the slightest bit realistic. This is crap.
Very interesting story. Well written with good sex and a little mystery.