All Comments on 'The Agency Ch. 02'

I think this will be a very good series and can't wait to read more

Wish I could apply for a job .. Penny

I love the way you retell pieces of the story but from another perspective. It's not repetitive but somehow just makes the characters feel more real. Thanks!

This just keeps on getting better. Once I realized this was going to be a POV story, I was concerned that it would get boring from being repetitive as so many POV tend to be but you managed to mix it up and not just state what their point of view was at the time but also little differences on the retelling which would be natural since everyone’s memories are different and unless people make up a story between them and rehearse it’s telling, they would have different things such as sight, sounds and smells as well as some people may hear something that another person missed or misheard. Excellent work so far and I hope it continues. Thanks for sharing this story.