All Comments on 'The Alchemist's Daughter'

by Bambi34567

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great fancifully story

Until knock knock knock

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
a BIG c

Crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Incest ?

Wrong Category.

rem556rem556over 3 years ago
Wrong category

No incest here... This should be in interracial.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Garbage

Absolute garbage. Completely wrong category.

Bambi34567Bambi34567over 3 years agoAuthor
Incest purists, I apologize!

My bad guys. I have received the well deserved ire of those annoyed by the classification. I'll be more careful next time 😂

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another BBC hype up story

So we are expected to believe that a alchemist who can change his daughter so much couldn't fix his 4 inch penis to be bigger, much less the rest of his body and not have attack or defensive potions at home to deal with intruders.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Anyway to get more racist?

Pick the most racist stereotypes, and about the only thing missing from this is someone saying "massa".

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This went from promising to complete trash in about a paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

did you have to make it so racist? concept was good but the almost minstrel-like levels of caricature were a total turn-off. why did you think this was okay?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yuck!

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