All Comments on 'The Alien Ship Ch. 01'

the story has potential . . though it does beg at least one major question . . how did the ship know Kyle's name . . . . . the answer to that will open several more questions all relating to why is it the ship seems to have spent the past two thousand years waiting just for him . .

I like where you are going. It is a good beginning to a sci-fi. Just enough erotic to tease and get you interested. I look forward to more chapters.

Looking forward to chapter to and seeing what those androids can do :)

But needs work. A lot of repetitiveness and a lot of unanswered questions, like how did the ship know Kyle's name and where the ship is. Also, it seemed rather similar to The Genesis Project by Mr. Marvel, but not entirely. Still, aside from all that, it was a decent start to what will hopefully be a good story.

he's been hiking, digging in the dirt, walking around ship. why is he not thirsty and wanting a bath before resting?

It reads like a children's book. I hope the other chapters are better, not that I'm likely to read them.

"There are currently 736 humanoid robots in existence aboard this vessel, all of which were manufactured in anticipation of your arrival."

Well, this harem story is escalating quickly. Looking forward to seeing how this works out. Personally, I'd rather see actual human crew-women rather than androids, but I'm willing to keep reading to learn more.

Not a bad start, I'll have to see if it keeps me interested. If it turns into nothing more than serial sexual encounters and/or orgies, I won't bother with reading more.

It is not a bad start, but the dialog and the background information were a bit lacking and stilted, ... some questions were never asked, that I thought should have been, .... like where this master / mother ship was located, and if it had a name / designation. And the Blonde, Asian and Black skinned androids should have or be given names (did they have numbers?) ... Also, the terms android and robot were used together, to mean the girls, and the dumb human was not corrected, .... was that just politeness? ... and if I were in Kyles position, I would've had many more questions, both big and small, and I would've taken a shower before bed, and sent my dirty clothes off to be laundered, ... anyway, nice start, ... ;-) ttfn

Nice start to the story. ! have enjoyed this chapter. AAAA++++