by nikki_2021
This story has an interesting premise. Good lead in to a perspective I've never before considered. It was a great read, fun, funny. Well done. I'm not sure it needs a part two. I like these two dedicated scientists and would hate to see them getting into trouble, carers ruined, trying to explain that Aliens (The Devil made me do it!) caused the pregnancy. But it might be fun to see how they talk their way out of it. Yes, Part two please!
This was a really great story so far please write more there is so much more that you can do with this story. Just off the top of my head these aliens could start working with the 2 humans after she's impregnated and/or do something with their minds so they still feel what the other is feeling after they leave. There are so many options with an alien that can control another's mind and body. Please write more.
"I am confused, Jein, Xu said. Although it is clear from the mating procedure we have analysed that the rod must enter the insertion sheath, this one desires to receive it in the nourishment orifice, though I can see no resulting benefit to the propagation of the species.
"I sense similar incongruities with this one, Xu. It appears it contemplates receiving pleasure from inserting the mating rod into the disposal orifice, and clearly there is no way for that activity to result in propagation."
LMAO! That exchange clinched the deal! A 5 is a ridiculously low figure to score this one! Infinity and beyond would be more appropriate. I love this story. It hits all my buttons even without an alien feedback assist. I love science fiction and I love erotic fiction.
Not just a hit. A grand slam! Thanks for a smashing good read!
I love your imagination and the pseudo-technical terms you have up with for the parts and actions.