All Comments on 'The Alternative Endings'

Excellent except for the last story. Part two is Sis gets pregnant. But whose baby is it, Dads or brothers?

Liked the multiple endings. When writing a story I’m sure you envision different ways it can go and this way you shared all your visions. Although not a fan of the last one, it was still an enjoyable read.

Really good fun and totally erotic writing.

Loved it.

I like what you did here in the storytelling. It was different from any other story and I liked all but the last one but even then it was a good story for what it was about. I still gave it 5 stars even with the last story not being for me.

Nice variety of endings and fun part any could happen.