All Comments on 'The Amazing Randy Pumps the Brakes'

While I really enjoyed the first story, this was wonderful. When I first started reading this story,I thought Randy was going to contact the one woman he couldn’t read so I was very surprised that instead he chose to contact Amy. I am so glad that this was the route you took because as the story progressed, the love was obvious and the emotion came through the story very clearly. Aside from all the things that were said between them, the one that really got me was when she asked him if anything was wrong and the clincher was when she asked if he was sick. When someone asks you that after not seeing them for awhile and they show up out of the blue, to ask if everything is alright is common but after you answer that everything is fine and the they ask if you are sick, they really care about you or at least in my experience it is true. Thank you for another incredible five star story.

J.D.

Thanks for reading and commenting on this story. I asked for comments and you delivered in spades.. I'm so glad you like the character. He's an interesting guy and it's been fun "fleshing him out."

A sequel is already in the works.