All Comments on 'The Amnesia of Beth's Father Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My 2 cents

Loved the series. I think you do good character development. The story line is interesting and I enjoyed how the story moved along (and hot!). I will continue to read your stories and thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot but too fucked up to be believable.

Bill S.

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