by pearlescent
An old tale well told at all levels. More of your work is needed here!
When he answered her with, "You are home, my angel", I shed a couple of tears of happiness.
You are very good at what you do. Please continue writing.
Wow, that was incredible. So sweet and so beautiful that I never wanted it to end; a rarity on this website. Thank you so much for not only writing this, but sharing it as well.
Extremelly well done. an excellent story, so moving and touching I almost felt I were him
"Neither of them knew what they were doing, but they both knew they wanted to get as close to one another, as close to being inside each other's skin, as possible." This whole story really touches the deeper feelings we sometimes don't even realize inhabit us. I liked this very much. You are a sensitive and talented writer. Thanks.