All Comments on 'The Arena'

I like how this author thinks !! 5 *

there

their

they are

Part of writing is knowing how to write

Sounds like lots of fun, for everyone! Am a nudist myself since 16, that's a Lot of years. Would love to 'watch And be Watched with my special one'.

Btw - Mr Anon... Take your criticism about writing methods/quality back to grade school where maybe someone like an English teacher might care about your desire to earn an A in her class, the rest of us couldn't care less about 'there', 'their', etc.

This would have been a better piece if it had been proofread more carefully.

What a wild fantasy ..... sex in front of an audience. Thanks for another great story.

As I get to enjoy these stories free, I don't crticize the author. I haven't volunteered to be an editor either so I am not in a position to comment on grammar.

Very fun well written story, thanks for your work!

It would be fun to do what they did in front of so many interested people. The writing was easy, although the story may have used a little bit of story filler. One exceptionally enjoyable aspect was there were no long, drawn out sentences, and strategic paragraph breaks made reading a pleasure!

My one and only complaint is the following: Writers must learn the differences between the following words and contractions: there, their, they're, your, and you're!

Using these words incorrectly is glaring, and seriously detracts from the story!

Great story, different scenario than most stories. Looking forward to the next instalment, hopefully before the end Vivien and Gwen will be involved 5*

Well thought out story, but wasn't really hot, it didn't get me aroused, however, I enjoyed it and have 4*

Liked it a lot. But in a big arena, no one could see much detail. They needed to be projected on the jumbo tron.