All Comments on 'The Arete - Princess-Consort Ch. 05'

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noodlyarmsnoodlyarmsover 3 years ago

Thoroughly enjoying this one. Not sure how much longer you intend to go with this one, but I'm along for the ride!

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago

Wonderfully written and amazing action! I love it, thank you!

NetforfunNetforfunover 3 years ago

So good, can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

FriskyMindFriskyMindover 3 years ago

Just keeps getting better and better! I’m curious how much of this is from what must have been serious research, and how much your imagination. Either way, it’s remarkable. Feel free to write a hundred more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Simply amazing

Congrats,I am waiting for more....

Slurpy29Slurpy29over 3 years ago

Congratulations on another very well written and exciting chapter. With the way you continue to develop Tai’s character as a humble, honest and noble person I can only imagine what greatness awaits her. She’s proven herself as a great strategist, negotiator and warrior. Once again, I can’t wait for the next installment. 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Just a great story

Even with no sex...just an amazing story teller! I look forward to reading every new chapter each morning when I see one posted. A true highlight of my day!!

MaonaighMaonaighover 3 years ago
Well-described

An exciting chapter and a well-described account of a military campaign. I loved some of the soldierly guidance from the old Warrant Officer ("...permission to think given..."), it rang so very true. As always, keenly awaiting further chapters.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

A breathtaking chapter or that made my pulse quicken ..... Im not into slaughters and so im happy we don't know if even one of the horde died - thank you for - so may could run over the mountains ( hopefully) ;) ........ But you and your magic pen made it an breathtaking adventure and thanks for the princesses love sick future to guide the hero back in safety

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Nicole2023Nicole202311 months ago

I hope the 20 with her made it out….this is good

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Looking for beta readers for drafts of new Arete chapters (different narrator, not Taiglox) in revision. If you've time to read and lend a critical eye, please let me know?