All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 016-020'

I love the idea of him and Agemon taking out the Spartan commander in Corinth--and I'm looking forward to that fight. Can't help but like Corinth's king, as well as the novelty of him possibly allying himself with Argos. What if the Messenians agreed to join and create a counterpoint to Sparta? Sparta's not interested in making nice anyway.

Well, damn...thought Praxis and Astara would pull this off...but not now, and it seems to me you've written out their love.

Great story, and nice interlude with Agemon going ga-ga over Cora. Would be cool to see him and Praxis form a fast friendship. Well told! 5

Just keeps getting better and better. Thank you

Go for the girl, and make your life in Corinth. With the support of Cypselus, who needs him, Praxis can get what he wants, the support to remove Damian and Xanthos permanently and become King of Argos. Then the alliance with Corinth can become a reality and the Spartan plans foiled in their lifetime.

Scores 5/5