All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 101-105'

Excellent story as always. I wondered what would happen with Astara. I feel Praxis might welcome her back, Lysandra might be okay, but Zenais... Oh that would be an interesting encounter... Lust or jealousy...

The best series story on the site right now. Great work.

Excepting from a little extra repetition from Nicomedes, you handled his exchanges with Praxis well, and with the Spartan army approaching, there was no other logical way than to wrap it up fast and focus them both; it's also lovely he has Phaedra for a half-sister now and they have a fighting chance to repel the Spartans and kill Nikandros.

Thanks for not forgetting about Mikon and the Band, and for them escorting Astara to Messene safely. Now the real adventure begins, as Praxis/Lysandra/Zenais will have to sort out how to handle Astara without it getting too messy (not forgetting Nico and Delia, along with Astara's mom).

You've set it up nicely for some real fireworks! 5

GR8 chapter .

Love the story! Love the characters! I really want to see the father-son relationship develop, and hope that Nicomedes is able to stick around and fill in the familial gap in their respective lives.