All Comments on 'The Arrangement'

very real piece......i enjoyed it immensely....

well done!

Very good story, Very nicely written!

Keep it up!

I liked the little twist ending. It seemed to be a lesson for those of us who think that it takes a special guy to make us feel beautiful. The character of the guy seemed a little cheesy/sleazy, though. I didn't find myself aroused by him. Karla sounded sexy, though!

I liked the little twist ending. It seemed to be a lesson for those of us who think that it takes a special guy to make us feel beautiful. The character of the guy seemed a little cheesy/sleazy, though. I didn't find myself aroused by him. Karla sounded sexy, though!

being a big girl myself I can totaly relate to Karla, but I have found that if I look at myself as sexy and deserving of love then others will also.The ending gave me a good chuckle...Thanks.

Truly Bobby is so bad, so good that he's happy, she's happy, and how the hell did that happen? I'll never tell.

Whoops? Hot!