All Comments on 'The Art of Seduction'

Not bad, but not my usual read. One thing. Spell-check might be at fault, but "tenet" is a belief. The word you wanted was "tenant", someone who rents a space.

Only read page one - don't like stories where the main character is a horrible person.

Fuck the spelling errors that had my clitty cumming twice

Your stories does things to me. Can't get enough.

The narrator's morals (or rather lack thereof) really disturbed me. Consensual submission is one thing, but this degree of manipulation made me feel ill. On the flip side, this was one of the more sensual stories I've read on Literotica...

Hard as a rock throughout all three pages! Loved the main character. His morals were questionable but I can't help getting excited by the thought of being taken like this. I wish David lived next door to me when I was younger! Great story. Great character development. Great descriptions of the sex. You know how to craft both the thrill and relief of a great sexual encounter into words. Thank you!

best story ive ever read wishing it was me in story

I LOVED it! Great job I liked how you actually said that David and Johnny moaned, most people forget that but it's my favorite part. Also I loved how you made David take his time and build up tension. Keep up the good work!!

I want this to happen to me. Such an amazing build up over the entire story. It was like edging for an hour. Thank you for writing such a great story. You had me hard though the entire reading.

Great description, great excitement, great sex, I think. I have never engaged in any of the sexual acts you described. Does it really feel so good to be sodomized by another man? Does swallowing cum after sucking a man's enlarged dick really taste good?

I am older and would like a younger man to be my daddy and make me his girl/boy.

Where do I look or how do I get found and seduced?

methinks the bj (i guess this stands for blow job, then aptly named) guy needs therapy. and he needs to be remanded in involuntary treatment. bet that should be right up his alley

Whilst I really did enjoy this story, it was highly erotic. I also found your morals to be lacking. The level of manipulation made me feel ill.

this was good, and fun to read, maybe a little arrogant, but fun

there is nothing like a good seduction.. I didn't find David's actions outlandish. I am into the slow steady rhythm of taking on a boy. The younger they are the slower I move, I'm not into having a lover so when the time is right I always ask the boy to bring a friend over,,, now I have help with the second boy.. nothing succeeds like a friend helping out. Very quickly they 'fall in love' I'm off the hook. Now on to the new paperboy

Always great to see a bjmichaels story pop up in the random stories, especially one that I hadn't read before. Always a HOT read.