All Comments on 'The Art Of Seduction'

Good until the actual sex scene. Also check your spelling here, hear and architect or archaeologist

it needs another chapter as it feels like it was stopped at the best bit.

Hey! I'm a huge fan of your stories. They are the hottest stories I've ever read and I've spent a lot of time on literotica. Please write more because you truly are talented. Seriously I NEED more of your stories.

i wish one of my sisters would do something like this for me, or at least find a girl who is into the whole brother-sister play. awesome stories, made me cum so hard!

Absolutly loved it, good job. And as for the person who stopped reading when Dean came in, I know what you mean I get like that aswell but trust me, keep reading and you'll love it.

it was a good story up to the middle when he invites his friend over to see his sister i stop at that point it just ruined the whole feel of the story

NaughtyBS, I think that this is your best effort so far. I really like your writing style. You tell wonderful sibling love stories. Please give us more.

Teaseing which.Fucking his 'friend' instead by accident huh? hmmph. Then asking him to 'get you pregnant'.LOL!Still daddys little needy girl.

If you didn't actually experience this, you have quite an imagination. It is an event that is totally understandable when two people share one heart.

That was by far the hottest story I have ever read!

Make more stories please!!!

write another chapter this story was hot

I'm glad they are making a baby. Maybe you can write another story abbut them having pregnant sex. Please read my stories under SEX_VAMPYRE