All Comments on 'The Art of The Squeal'

Worth continuing. A delightful concept with much to explore!

but definitely needs another section or two to see what happens to the pair of them

yes continue please.

Only contain if there is no more of what u had in this story, if I was her I would have said no way was I living here with you, not if I have to put up with that all the time

I would like to add to my perious comment, I do not really like a story that has one girl restraining another, she should have told her why she was doing it first, but I guess about leaving after it was done, if you have no place to call home, then I guess it was a good deal,but if she had said no would she have still gotten all the money? in my opinion there is no such thing as mild BDSM, I do not care, no amount of money is worth giving up your freedom,not even if you trust the person doing it

Im 48. I don't have gray hair. Not a single strand. And i don't have liver spots on my hands. That being said, i did like this story and would enjoy reading more of these two characters. Some tongue action next time though.

I dont understand why soebody would whine & complain about bdsm sex when your intro clearly stated that there would be some restraint & forced sex. Really irritates me when people review stories without paying attention, instead just complain because their particular kink was somehow offended by your story.

Just finished reading, its like you captured every fetish i had and introduced me to one i didn't.

Really amazing and original piece, thanks so much for writing it.

great story, i would love to hear more about these two. and if Sylvia got that forever companion she always wanted

Hmm, I can't seem to stop reading SYLF as, depending on chosen spelling of the homophones, Sylph or Sylph. I thus find myself picturing that street corner as being either populated by fey air spirit hookers or team rocket goons. I'm not sure which is more ridiculous in context ^_^

@jenorma2012: with all possible respect, your comments suggest you don't properly understand what BDSM is supposed to be. If your basis is 50 shades or some other poor rendition of kink please don't consider them representative. In any case, one shouldn't judge others for practicing consensual activities simply because you don't share their tastes or interpretations of those activities.

Your kink is not my kink but your kink is OK.

please write and upload what happened afterwards...

I loved the story, this is MollFlanders5 from Twitter. Well done. Great writing. Two scenes stood out wonderfully: when she walked to Noelle to pick her up and of course the full painting scene was super exciting.