All Comments on 'The Artist's Wife'

will flame it, but it is written pretty well, and definitely hot - too bad LW is the clubhouse for limp dick woman haters and illiterate spooge monkeys who will downvote it. Absolutely worth 5*

some one had their feelings hurt, resident closet cuck seem upset that people are not as sick as him the loser. As far as the story goes just another sicko .

The single uniting aspect that all misogynists share is that their actions and reactions are, like BTTap pointed out, based upon fear. Because they do not have a developed frontal lobe, they somehow manage to get scared by fiction on a sex story site. Leave them be for chirissakes, isn't their existence demeaned and pathetic enough already?

who cares about all this rock and roll crap.Hard to get interested in this story.

Well written and hot scenes. Keep writing.

I'm an old fashioned faithful husband (with an old fasioned faithful wife), no "closet cuck" or misogynist or any of the other terms used to denigrate men who don't like cuckold or wife-sharing stories. When I was stationed in Germany a long time ago, I had a married friend who had an open marriage. We socialized together whenever I was not on assignment. I became close with his wife because I wasn't a part of their sex life, she could trust me when he went on assignment, and so could he. They told me all about their adventures, stories much like this one with perhaps only one or two other men, and sometimes a woman or two included. I was okay with it, to each his own, but my life is what turns me on, not yours. Is that okay with you?

is confusing me for someone who gives a fuck. 5*

is a judgmental prick who thinks anything besides "2 minutes in the dark in the missionary position strictly for procreation) is an abomination (see Rick Santorum, et al). No idea why those bible-thumpers read here other than a secret cuck fetish. If people have an open marriage, it doesn't hurt me so why should I give a shit?

Stories like this one get bombed though, and utter crap gets praised, based not on writing talent but based on adherence to a code of irrational hate-filled hypocrisy. Review a list of talented writers who no longer submit in this category and you'll see the handiwork of "closet cucks" or "wanna be cucks" or whatever you want to call those sexless losers. 5 stars

A surprise gang-bang, organized by the bangee, to video film Hubby's fantasies. Not your everyday fare! Good writing mechanics. A little more char-dev on the other two co-stars would have been appreciated, but it certainly works as-is!

5* sin duda!

I appreciated that you took the time to develop the internal dynamic of the group, especially the charged relationship between our narrator and Anna. Would be interested in hearing what happened next, and whether it had any long-term effect upon the final triangle.

looking forward to the sequel

I normally pass up most graphic sex. Most of it is just boring Tab A into Slot B crap. Fun to do, boring to read.

But this story was different. Light, fun, innovative with non-trivial characters, including the minor ones. I truly like it. Thanks for the effort.