All Comments on 'The Arts Ardane 01'

Devan is a hot little piece of tail too, and definately a red head with that temper lol Loved it Dark, as always

Jason

Dark,

I really, really enjoy your style of writing. You have a great knack for characterization. I enjoyed the descriptions you use and the time you take with them. Great job building up to the action! Keep up the good work.

Picked up quite nicely. Very good use of fantasy and hot, squishy sex. Well done! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of them. Thanks. :)

Another damned good example of why really good prose is art. You hatched it well, you presented it nicely, your erotica was sweet, and you had a surprise ending that was totally believable. Besides that I liked it :) Lynn

Loved it.

Neat diversion with the wager, making it seem like the murders were linked to the wagers.

Definitely gives a better understanding of Devan's distrust of men, too.