All Comments on 'The Assassin and the Sorceress Ch. 07'

No matter how long of a time passes, the moment I see an update to this story I instaclick. Love it, and love morgana so much.

From a diehard nudist and lover of epic fantasy! Thank you and I will be waiting for part 8.

The manoriams and depictions that you portray for 350 AD are simply impossible. I know you want to tell a good story using fiction (hence why it’s in Sci-Fi & Fantasy) but it’s far to outlandish for it to feel immersive or even vaguely convincing. It has the feel and technological progression of an 1800’s outreaching village and the people think more inline with someone in the 1920’s. It is a good story but the lack of effort for it to be believably set in the time period you state really hurts the reading experiance.

I have really enjoyed this story and hope we do not have to wait too long for the next instalment. The story is well written and the characters are sympathetically drawn. Please keep up the good work.