All Comments on 'The Assignment'

Thanks Amandagirl for the viewpoint of the girl/woman in the story without resorting to 3rd person, also a very sexy adventure...keep writing..

Woonderful

Awesome story. Its so visual and erotic. Loved the combiination of detail and fluidity, as if it really happened. If it did, your story telling is fresh and exciting. If its fiction, you have awesome imagination. Keep writing.

u have no idea how wet i am right now...!!!...god sweetie...u sound just like me...doesn't it just drive u crazy when guys humiliate u sexually in public like this...???...pleeeese keep writing about your adventures...i need to cum again...grin...luv u...candy

Erections all round what a story thank you very much

A sexy romp :-)

Tightly written tale with hot, well-conceived action. Bravo.

Congratulations on an excellent story! It was well written and highly erotic! Loved the humiliation theme and the sluttishness exhibited by the girl in the story! Looking forward to reading your next submission. Keep up the good writing ;-)

It's nice to find a story that really can set the scene and put pictures in the mind.

Now some more OK!!!

Nice, richly detailed progression in the levels of challenges.

The problem with this story is that it sounds like it was written by a man and not a woman. Not once has this girl had her pussy eaten, she did all the oral play on these men. True passion is give and take, not all give. Better luck next time *winks*

I justmade myself come from reading this... wow. great.

Great story AmandaGirl. A wonderful mix of innocent minx and absolute, born again, slut. More, please... (I'm begging) please. Devotedly yours.

Good God, that was... hot! You managed the submission theme beautifully. Now I wanna walk around in skimpy clothes and have random guys do this same thing to me. Can we have more, please?

This is what I desire my Dom to put me through, give me tasks exactly like this to fulfill and wait for my detailed description afterwards and hope I please him.

Kisses,Wendy