All Comments on 'The Asylum Ch. 01'

What a start..... I am hooked!!!

Not a BDSM in sight and no reason for her to be there. This wasn't a story. It was barely an opening paragraph. UGH!

... but this was weird.

I don't think it even belongs in BDSM, and I am not at all certain which other category it might fit.

Perhaps further chapters will make it clear what this is all about.

Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us -- three stars.

I think your story fits the "horror" genre more than BDSM.

Maybe you should try re-submitting in that genre when you're done with your second chapter and post the 2 chapters together, or seriously re-evaluate if the sequel has its place in this category.