All Comments on 'The Auction Pt. 01'

A beautiful story. Who better to teach a young adult about love and sex than the parent. The boundless, unconditional love, safety and security provided by the pairing could not be matched with a stranger. As long as the incestuous relationship is mutually consenual (without positional powerplay; implied or actual emotional abandonment; nor actual physical or emotional abuse) what happens between consenting adults is no one business.

I liked the basis of the story, but it was hard to fallow at times.

Keep going with the writing, it will improve.

beautiful story of a young woman's first time with her loving father.

Love your stories and your writing. Hope there is much more of Paul and Tonia as well as Toni and Christian.