by Snekguy
Awesomeness, can't put it down! Thanks for this epic tale looking forward to the end so I can actually do something useful even if not as enjoyable as reading this!
The love scene between Xipa and Fletcher was extraordinarily done! Outstanding dialogue!!!
Bluejay going full action hero towards the end there to rescue a father and his child was pretty great. Also what a tweest, the giant lizard is a giant female lizard.
This keeps getting better as it goes on. I can’t imagine the effort you put in writing this. It definitely paid off. One more chapter to go. Thanks
Ffs. I’m so wound up after that it will take me days to calm down. Just brilliant. What a pace to this story, never a moment to catch my breath before a twist or detail jumps out amidst continuous action. So we’ll written, just excellent. Ten out of 5 stars.
Great story, FYI "Bingo" means just enough fuel to return to base. What you ment was "winchester" out of ammo
Above and beyond Snek. What a wonderful exciting read. Thank you so much for it. On to chapter 4.
Thank you so much for your fantastic stories. I have read them all and just enjoyed the livin bejeezuz out of every single one. I’m bummed that I only have this last one till you come out with some more…
I really wanted to hold off on any comments until I read this in full, but I had to express how much I enjoyed this ending. I feel like the "band of brothers" set-up with all the new aliens was a long time coming, and it was pulled off perfectly. Xipa, Fletcher, Gustave, Ruza and especially Bluejay are some of my favorite characters of yours now, and while it seems this is the end of their adventure, I really hope to see them again soon. Excellent work.
Bluejay needs to get three more pistols. One for each arm.
Now I just need to find your Reddit profile. I can see where BluefishCakes got his inspiration from.
I love it but on the re-edit of this … Maybe delete some of the more repetitive descriptions of scenery.