All Comments on 'The Awakening of Polly Pinnick Pt. 01'

Masterful story, really capturing the heroine's feelings as she has her first participatory orgasm. A sensitive depiction of an awakening to the depth of sexual involvement. You just paint the arc of her trajectory so well, from her uncertainty about whether she's to blame about her lack of response to her boyfriend, to her guilt about responding to his brother, to her realization that sex is more wonderful than she had thought. Terrific story, thanks a lot.

Didn't bother reading past there.

Very compelling story :)