All Comments on 'The Azure Rider Ch. 03'

Absolutely love it! Your characters have such great depth. Hoping Orion changes his mind about turning Agatha over.

I think that this is a great story, and hope to see much more of it soon. Longer segments, please!

You are doing great sweety

Great story and interesting characters. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Okay 100% honest here I am absolutely shocked that this isn’t already a published BOOK. The writing is incredible and the characters as well. You are so incredibly skilled I’m blown away. Better than MANY published books I’ve read

Love this story! “Her heart beating a reggaeton in her chest” was a bit jarring, though.

great

-Reggaeton comment, thank you, noted!

-Longer segments comment: I'm working on it.

-About Orion changing his mind: Let's see what happens! ;)

Thank you so much for your feedbacks. It means a lot that you all are reading this story. :)

Well done. I agree with the publication comment, I would buy this as a book!

I always root for the old love. Hoping Siegel

Love love love!! This is an awesome story!! Thank you so much for sharing it!!!

Your doing good with this story and even on this site I believe a strong story is better then a poor one full of sex.

Thank you so much for the kind comments. I'm now half worried about disappointing y'all with the next installment. :p

It has been submitted and is pending moderator's approval.

Again, thank you for reading. :)

~Ash

this is literally the only thing i’ve read in so long. i love it so much. pleaaaaase make more. also can you give us an instagram link for you or something?

I can't wait to read the next part. It's so refreshing different! Thank you for investing your time and energy in this Ava-fern!

Thanks for sharing your work! Really enjoying it so far.

He's not very likeable yet, so i'd like a focus on her and her dragon, or some character development for him.

Great character development and storyline! Loved it. Can't wait to read next. This was very interesting

Dear Anonymous and Anonymous,

I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the story. Hope you keep reading. I intend to finish this story by Chapter 8 (tentatively). I do have an Instagram link in my bio, but I'm not sure what to post there. Maybe pictures of places that inspired some of the settings in this story? Super confused about that.

Dear cantfightfate,

I do agree with you, I don't think Orion is very likeable either. I am aiming for a troubled hero with a redemption arc in this story. I appreciate your constructive criticism very much and thank you for taking the time out to comment. I hope you continue reading.

Dear Knothead23,

I really appreciate you commenting at the end of every chapter and leaving your opinion. As a newbie writer testing the waters, comments like yours are very valuable to me.

Dear Thaliara,

Thank you for the encouragement and understanding that building a world takes time and energy. However, your constant encouragements make it worth the effort. Hope you keep reading!

If we don't leave feedback, silly readers as we are, charge it to our minds not our hearts. Also, we are often owed into silence. Superb storytelling. 10/10

Very glad that I came upon this tale. The story will either soar or fail on how Orion’s character evolves. Bravos so far.

You are doing a great job. Love the storyline and the characters. No need to apologize for the lack of sex. It's better when it fits the story.