All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

Great story, excellent build up. Can't wait for part 2.

Kim

hap1210@hotmail.com

So much so that I reviewed it on the New Story Reviews of the Author's Hangout of Lit Forums.

Hey...Style Guy,

Your latest is your greatest...by far!!! The dialog is great, your description of the horny MILF is too good to be true and the sex is fantastic.

I might have to find a college boy to baby sit my kids!

Tammi

...tension, and hot, nasty sex. Pacing was excellent. Very well-writtened. Look forward to more of your fantasies. Confident guy and a hot bitch--how much more can a fellow ask for?

The story was so hot, it made my head hurt.

Please write more. :)

It's so rare to run across someone in Literotica that can actually write!

One thing I'd consider though, would be sending your manuscripts around and trying to sell them before publishing them here.

You're good. You should get paid for it!

Amy needs to become a Mommy again, this time with you as Daddy.

Bestest story..... I can actually relate to it..

the idea is reaaaalll

God,so many cretins out there and so little time to get rid of them !

God, when ever you described her, I wanked sooo hard... My dick is gonna' be hard for weeks...

awesome story. well written. the dialogue and teasing were great and the payoff sex action was hot.

I am glad it was edited but someone should use spell check! The story was good but I cringe when reading the same misspelled words all the time!

So sad that nearly every writer has to use the "big cock" crutch to create eroticism. It instantly makes the story unbelievable as 97% of the penises are 6" or less. Add to that the propensity for the big cock owners to be so lousy in bed and there you have it. Lazy writing, story ruined.

After you screw up the lives of one entire family and make the kids you babysat for, lose their married parents and inherit a bastard step sibling, I can only hope your wife steps out on you regularly and slips in a present that requires penicillin to fix it.

Who appointed you the moral arbiter of society. They had fun, enjoyed what they were doing, and are adults.

Take your moral diatribe elsewhere. I enjoyed this story very much. It was interesting to read, was on point and said it like it was.

If you do not like it then why did you read it?

You keep messing up homophones like the above, writing your, when you mean you're and the reverse, and it's far from the only mistake.

Please get an editor and fix it.

Well what a wet dream that was , I do have to ask why do they all have to have a 8 inch cock that is like a coke can? If not bigger??

Good descriptions and not a bad plot.

Sometimes you really give me heartburn. Your talent seems to me to be self-evident, but some of your plots are gag-me-with-a-spoon horrible.

I would love it if you would do apart 2 and 3 for this story

More crap

Epilogue: Both of these idiots were too stupid to notice the hidden camera. One year later Amy was living alone in a dingy apartment, divorced and working at a local Starbucks. Just for fun her ex would come in and make her take his and his girlfriend's order. Young stud Chris disappeared and was never heard from or seen again. Too bad they didn't look at the bottom of a nearby lake. Maybe in a year or two his decomposed body would be free from the chains and cinderblocks so whats left of him can float to the top.